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Oct 05, 2009
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The Eye's Trickery (*prose poem*)
(after F. W.)
I have returned to a time when clock hands were unnecessary. A carousel of them, thick steeled with black, and green numbers return me to a messy closet with a moldering keyhole. The doorknob is chipped red, firm against the wind. A gigantic pupil
stares back blocking my view--a familiar human eye, maybe I think, playing the role of an ozone layer, a vulnerable succubus.
I recognize many pockets in the staring dune it represents and want to poke with my thumbnail. It blinks and I realize my time travel has stripped my hand of everything but pulsing bone. I am now a skeleton in the closet of another's memory which will soon come to pass. I ask to be taken back. The pupil locks gigantically, forming a squinty mouth. "This is what you wanted".
I have returned to a time when clock hands were unnecessary. A carousel of them, thick steeled with black, and green numbers return me to a messy closet with a moldering keyhole. The doorknob is chipped red, firm against the wind. A gigantic pupil
stares back blocking my view--a familiar human eye, maybe I think, playing the role of an ozone layer, a vulnerable succubus.
I recognize many pockets in the staring dune it represents and want to poke with my thumbnail. It blinks and I realize my time travel has stripped my hand of everything but pulsing bone. I am now a skeleton in the closet of another's memory which will soon come to pass. I ask to be taken back. The pupil locks gigantically, forming a squinty mouth. "This is what you wanted".
Comments
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Good lesson in this one be
Quillsvein1
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you