The Power of the Pack

I really enjoyed this poem of the wolves. A powerful write, great vision in my mind and I think you have done justice to these proud animals. Well done. Love Lyz. xx

this is a really good story I would have liked to see more to it ... This felt like an introduction to a bigger story ... and I think it would be great to expand it more to give it more depth ... still a solid write thats worth the work Kind regards love Jayne

The poem is really eerie and haunting, wolves are special creatures..The most amazing thing is that they are gregarious, and they go through a lot of travail to survive, just like humans. The pack is their way to fight Chaos, and it's the reason they are still here. Wolves are like poets, in many ways. Now, you made a philosopher, but I like it. And I like your poem, truly. Sincerely, Hugo

I like this poem because it elaborates along a story line and its construction has some build up tension and mystery and release the wolves are still in small pockets of woods down our way (where I grew up) and from what the trappers tell me they are pretty large now that they are protected with no longer the bounty on them I have only seen small dog wolf mixes and they were very shy timid creatures but they do look quite different from a dog I read much on them scientific one of the keen points was the power in their jaws to extract the marrow from the toughest of bones crusher on the paw their voice is very beautiful I have never heard it in the wild but only from cd from the library we are domesticating the world one species at a time and those that dont agree perish makes one want to howl in lament