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Oct 06, 2009
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Goodbye Kiss
Ever as my temples gray
with blend of browns and whites;
sweeter skies are calling,
tender quiet seeks them out.
Fresher breaths await my course -
though memory serves to vanquish light
where autumn reds deliver care
a fresher touch
on lighter air.
That which once was golden - gone
and heart releases joy now known
to peace pulled wisdom on sweet lips
of goodbye kiss
with goodbye kiss.
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Oct 06, 2009
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Idlemindwondering
16 years 8 months ago
I like
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
suggestions welcome.
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Wisteria
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
yes, exactly - it is final
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Wisteria
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you