torch song

..."see, the trouble with truth is, I am comdemned in it, especially at 5:00 in the morning, and I can't carry a tune to save my own mind or my soul..." Deep, profound words, such as many you have written, they ring an all too familiar note, even though I can say I'm a church tenor myself, and I can carry a tune, although imperfectly. Sincerely, Hugo

Now, you've really hurt my tender feelings :) You are lucky I haven't checked out your nationality yet, but I will..., more lol :) A, you've really made my day, Thank you, my dear friend! Sincerely, Hugo

these are thoughts I have often, for I know the self-indulgent fool of me has less right than even the ant biting my arm... he is a mover, a shaker... a fucking survivor. this poem left me gasping along a parallel highway... all right, I didn't run out in the road, but it is damn good! Richard

Your last line nearly took my breath away, sunflower tears over midnight skies ... My two favourite things night skies and sunflowers but with tears ... Anna hun you have the ability to touch minds and change lives from thousands of miles away just in the power of your words ... I dont know what it is but the way you write ... I dream to write half as profoundly as you ... sorry I cannot explain it ... and like Richard there were lines that had me gasping ... this is amazing piece of writing And so sorry to be late getting here I went to bed last night like a good girl and stayed there ... Hope you had a good visit and Jake is home now hes going to look at that thing that wouldnt work for me lol haha love and biggest hugs beautiful Lady,Jayne x x x

Excellent words, title, content, flow and all the above comments. You are truly gifted. And this poem was written by no fool. Love to you and yours. XX Lyz.