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Oct 05, 2009
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Where were you dear
Where were you dear
Where were you
When the lights went out,
I was waiting for you
I liked the way
You pushed me about
Like the way
You always used to
But the kissing was just great
As ever before
Like ‘twas the night before
Where were you
When the lights were out
I was in the wash room
My dear
Were you afraid of the dark?
She looked from the corner of her eye
Saw Jack smile
She smiled back
No my dear
I knew you were near.
— loved, Oct 05, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello loved
loved
16 years 7 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 6 months ago
thanks