Birds of a feather pt 2

moved to http://www.neopoet.com/node/28137

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Bonitaj

16 years 7 months ago

Nina!

what an interesting theme and way of tying the two in together! Loved the line - "I am not latex and dancing - but purpose and want"... with a covert way of saying - I am both latex and dancing and the latter and why can't I be "all things to all people"? Similiarly - why can't the bird be 'not just - but also!' Nothing is mutually exclusive - or at least seldom so! Interesting paradoxes you have conjured up, always a twist in your tales... Well done Boni

Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Boni,

wow, you got that connotation without even reading the first part, that's awesome, it seems this one may be able to stand on its own (I had my doubts about that, had considered editing it into the other poem). Please do check out "Birds of a feather", too, if you can spare the time. I am now working on a third part, by the way. Yours, ~Nina

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Nina

This part of the poem, reminds me that there is an appropriate time and place for everything. Loved it. These are my favorite lines: The bird longs for springtime, the girl for Saturday nights yet they crave an eye to behold their courageous, never ceasing stand against life’s cruel odds Always, Cat

Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Cat,

thanks for following this little story in several chapters. It was funny how each part seemed to call for another one. I believe it is now finished with the third part. Yes, there's a time and place for everything. Yours, ~Nina