Within the Seeds of Sunflowers

Wonderful. Send some to me. Lol. I love 2nd + 3rd stanzas, the seeds are tasty too, 7 and 9 stanzas, oh, fuck it, I love the whole lot. lol. We gotta stop meeting like this, everyone is bound to talk. Sorry Snake, are u always the last to know? lmfao. Ok, u can have her back when u put on another poem. lol. Love to you all. Love Lyz, again and again.

I absolutely loved this poem,flowing so nicely on the 'fibers of the page'lol,I'm sure many sunflowers will grow from the kiss of your pen.Wonderfully written,Jayne , Lots of love and hugs, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

Very nicely done. Nice flow throughout.

Loved this Jayne. Magical, indeed! Feel your words are embracing my heart... Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

The thing I like best about your short lines is, that they are so deeply profound and full of punch. You say so much with those short lines. My favorite lines: Now planting my seed with love in my sight, I wish it to flourish a precious long life Covering these pages in tendrils sublime, Thus binding loves magic I send it through time I think these are so true of you. Love, Cat

This is without doubt the most positive poem I ever read in a long time. Such poetry is what we need to press ahead following our dreams. Excellent, my dear friend. Sincerely. Hugo

Hugo said it so well . Beautiful poetry uplifts the greyest day. Your sense of soul magic is profound and love always love. Much love to you Jayne Liz

is a joy forever! As indeed this piece is and will forever remain! THanks for showing us the flowers that have sprung up along life's path! Excellent as ever Bonita j

I wonder what it would look like? Would it be bright and sunny, like the flower? A thought that blossomed in my head. LOL " Make your own mold, pour yourself in "To not be yourself, is the greatest sin. Oh, how I love those lines! You have written another thought provoking poem, and I love this direction. Love and the higgest of all bugs, ~ Gee

What a beautiful poem. I loved every word of it.I love sunflowers. The sunflower is the state flower of kansas and that reminds me of my grandmother who lives there. So it put a smile on my face. Elizabeth

excellent - wish I had more time to critique, but don't have much to even write, these days. But tell ya what, Oz Lady...u keep writing em, I'll keep enjoying their sheer pleasure. absolutely excellent. Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

what can I say but another superbly writen poem by my darlin lol they just keep getting better and better more high fives for my darlin love always Hubby

i agree with snake. eggshellent jayknee 2 bums u keep showing me up like this im gunna have to bug ur pc and steal all your poems :p <3 ♣

Dear Jayne, I'm better late than never? "Thus binding loves magic 
I send it through time" Oh bound in this magic poem so sweetly tumbling down the page in its own innocence, like a beautiful little waterfall tumbling down the side of a mountain, creating wedding veils of fine tendrils seeking the best way to descend, and having descended gives life to this wondrous sunflower seed, that leaps up and becomes a reflection of the sun, timeless beauty. Jayne. Love Ann of Norway

Jayne How do you do it every word flows so beautiful amazing rhyme Well this crazy lady has giant sunflowers. As you enter my house through the front door there is a radiator in the hall and our of my radiator I have giant yellow and blue sunflowers stems down to the floor. among many other crazy things in own domain. always Electric Blue

beatiful right and so much insight in it ..loved it *lotsa love*

Jayne Just read this again and it is so serene the words just flow like a gentle stream on a sunny day trickling over the rocks with sunlight shinning into my secluded grotto as always Magz Hope you are keeping well my dear friend.

"Make your own mold and pour yourself in," This is a special expression and has many meanings, and is so defiant of deviation from being oneself, we are who we are, and yet we can mould ourselves into other than what we are, and then things go awry and the pattern of our lives is disturbed. I feel you have been yourself and that is a gift from yourself and from those around you, and we love the result dear Jayne, so keep being you and we shall keep feeling happy for you and whatever happens, we all love you, you know that don't you? If you are away we will think of you, if you send in poems we also will think of you, in all circumstances we will think of you and doing so will send vibes of our feelings to you to give you a hand in fighting difficult things, you can rely on us we are here for you. Dear sweet sunflower loving Jayne, may the sun always shine for you as you send it out to all of us here and in the many happy poems you have written. My love especially Jayne, ' est bon chance pour le future'. Ann of Norway.

Ahhhh....Love! To choose it over sadness is to weep for the garden for love Knew Eve; for love, came Eve; and love thus flowers all her days gladly.

and a thousand and thousand more stars for your most wonderful poem dear Jayne. May they shine upon you and your beautiful sun flower heart forever.. love. o molly