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Frozen In Time.

I remember, in the darkness of night

Belatedly driving the unknown road

Of one of those anonymous places

Always bursting with anonymous faces

Now, this place

It may… or may not
have been on a map.

But it was winter for a fact

The girl by my side warmed my hand,

She stares blankly outside her window

At the trees, flickering in the night air,

Drawing comfort from the countryside

She tried confiding in me once or twice

But I shrugged it off with concentration,

Filled with hurried anticipation.

The roads were ours, empty,

But eventually

We came to a red light.

I jolted hard in my seat,

Clenching the steering wheel tight

She asked what was wrong

And all I could do was stare.

Her gaze pursued mine

Remaining unaware.

And then she gasped.

Masked amongst the black skies

Stood a man shrouded in shadow,

A cold shiver drifted in

Supplied by his eyes

He was watching us,

Towering over the car,

And as if life was in slow motion

The last thing I heard surpass

Was the sweet sound of the breaking glass.

— Bosscombat, Oct 04, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

WOW!

Sheesh, Boss! You really scared me on this one. I love the spooky stuff... want more! Always, Cat
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

lol glad you enjoyed it :p ♣
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

yes. are you implying im strange :p glad you liked it. ♣
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 8 months ago

Hey!

What is all this talk about being strange and wearing a hood Kailashana? Great piece by the way my friend...having read a few of yours this one hits the spot. Superb imagery. regards HS (Hooded Stranger!) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 8 months ago

Glove?

It fits like a glove, which is a stupid saying, because it really should fit like a hood shouldn't it. HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Boss

Well done, Jeepers Creepers. Quite scary and I for one loved this, you always enthrall. Love Lyz. XX
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

hey lyz glad you enjoyed it. scary? really? lol ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Matty

This one is one of the best poems you have writen !!!! the ending is superb ... I am so proud of you always ... btw tried to let you know last night I gotta come down to Newcastle next week for a day :) soooo will call in and see you guys if your not away on tour with the band ... love you huni ... great work love and huggest bugs Jayne x x x P.S Anna he always has that hoodie on lol and they other day I couldnt believe he had it on in 34 degree heat standing on his front verandah it was soo hot and I cant believe he didnt pass hahahha love you brother ...
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

cheers hun no worries you know your always welcome! we dont start our tour till friday night and even then the show is in newcastle hahah <3 ♣ pea ess. i don't always have thick layers on.. only when im not sleeping.