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Of course it's a tea cup, I chuckled & felt proud of myself for making the connection (I seem to crave that in writers & feel sated when some less obvious elements become apparent). Actually I DO think it adds to the poem wonderfully though, it lends a kind of rushing swirling energy to the flow of the words, & I love that on getting to the saucer the energy settles & stabilizes a bit to allow reflection. Lovely, I shall have to go & make one now (I am having to cut down to hardly any coffee, sigh!) Cheers Anni~ "When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace". H.H. the Dalai Lama

Clever clever man ... I love your teacup and the poem is pretty hot too lol loved it great concrete poem ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

What's that? The enjoyment of the contents of the "Tea cup"? Good cogitative stuff this Espen. You're on form as usual! Cheers Boni