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God or sod


A mind that sees, see all that's there

and still can ponder day by day

on this and that,

has riches more than any millionaire(ess)

she is right there and any whim

or gust of wind can raise her mind to stare and see

beauty in an object they despise

as in their eyes its rubbish, trash and junk.

 

The plastic left there lying on the sod

becomes a spectre of a maiden floating in the mud's

browns brain - a drain

yet she so white with folds like silk

is beautiful.

 

or in the town where hieroglyphs of taggers'

decorate the walls, that's what appals the people 

going by

but I see with what flair of human energy

what aesthetic verve the curves are made

and in that sign see 

art.

 

For what is art? A name made famous

fine?

But art is when we reach beyond the human drudge

and say something sublime

be it poetic

or in humour clothed

its all the same, it lifts the spirit, gives it wings

enthusiastic joys

whatever form that word called art employs.

 

So when you next wake up at dawn

look out and see the clouds form shapes

with some here, or there,

a sympathy that harmonises with our brains

creates within, yes art. 
— Nordic cloud, Oct 03, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Ann H

And what a lovely piece of art u have created. Well done Ann, this is just magic. I enjoyed reading your weave. Love from Lyz. XX
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 8 months ago

Hello There Ann

Of God or sod indeed---I can't quite bring myself to admire the litter along the road, but I do feel something quite uplifting when I see it all collected in bags at the side of the road ready to be gathered into the garbage truck, or better yet, the people dressed in orange suits collecting it. I, too, see a mind and spirit expressed in graffiti, and I am glad that in some cities, they preserve it as art. And if I just look, I can see the most marvelous colors and shapes in the most mundane of topographies. I have come to love watching the scenery change from state to state, each state having something quite unique of its own in its landscapes, from flat and rocky, desolate and brown to mountains covered in trees and streams and trees. I could go on an on in this manner, but I will spare you. Yours, Deelilah
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Ann of Norway:

I was astounded at the beauty and perfection of your poem. Well, I must thank you for the comment you made a while ago on one of mine; it was really an invitation to a feast, your own gallery of stars and planets, your own world, amazing and alive with joy. Thank you, indeed. Sincerely, Hugo