Red and Yellow

This red
dust
I see
before my
eyes
makes my
vision impaired
and
wearing
a mask
is a must

this red
dust
that has
covered everything
from top
to toe
means cleaning
won't cover
the rust

this red
dust
that came
from far
inner west
carried on
a windy
cloud
of red
and
yellow lust...

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Country/Region: AUS

Comments

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Fleur

well done, desert dirt. Wasn't it horrid. It is nice to read about this. a cloud of red and yellow lust. Loved this and love to you, From Lyz. XX

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 7 months ago

It was horrid

been hanging to write something about it, so glad you loved it. thank you :)fleur

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Fleur

Red and yellow lust ...in dust but a must to wear a mask ... great visual poem as you always do with these ones ... another short lined gem and I love the way you write ... hope your posting again soooooon I need another fleur poem !!!!!!! love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 7 months ago

I had to add you again as a

buddy, thought I already did and I'm currently not getting any notifications on my postings or anyone else. So a bit slow in replying. Currently working on some more poems but not quite finished, maybe tomorrow I'll post another. so glad you like this one and your fleur fix will come soon. xxxxxx00000000:)f