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The art of slow
You are master of the inadvertant touch
Of seemingly unintended placement
Of slow building, slow cooking, slow burning
Sensuality
You are the Raj of the casual connection
Your silk skinned tenderness tossed rakishly my way
Then lingering
The flow you build
To wild rivers of intensity
Directed by a single well timed brush of fingertip
Or wrist
Your long, long limbs abundant, willowy and ever entwining
The catch of breath
An invitation
To continue
Amiable, “accidental”, conjunctures
And rivulets to rivers,
Wilder flooding lakes
Swelling into ocean thrashing indigo depth
I love
your
so
slow
fingers
The skirting
And the bridging
The sweeping arcs
that
contemplate
their
own
point
of
……..
contact
(in breathless anticipation)
…….Yes, slowly
And……… yes, deftly
The subtle pressing urgency that holds itself at bay
Knowing it will meet a brighter bloom, with some delay
A deeper memory
A molten lava canyon river flowing orange bright
(where some would settle still for being washed up on some rocks!)
You
You sail your obsidian
Beyond the heated mounds of restless budding lust
Take your time to crest the reaches of a worthy man
To meet, in time, the now smouldering eyes
Of a worthy woman
In this slow intensity
Where no-one else could breathe
My gentle scientist, you breathe fire into me
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Anni
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
Ta & warmth your way gentle Cat
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
No matter...
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
Funny, I wrote this in response to a comment this morning where
themoonman
16 years 8 months ago
Anni...
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
congrats on AEC results, so glad to see you up there, & thank yo
Idlemindwondering
16 years 8 months ago
I like
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
takes a man of wonderful skill & presence to actually make such
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Cloudthings
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
those kind of writes are often hard to get perspective on for me
orgami
16 years 8 months ago
Clever wit
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
great to see you, & thank you. I'm really glad it reached you t
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
Truly this is a write from a
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
so glad you enjoyed this... I had a chuckle about the pregnant b
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
You have given us the whole ocean, Anni.
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
I wish it for you too dear one, I don't believe we are ever too
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Other than a sigh… I have
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
A sigh is a good thing, slow exhalation can rebalance your brai
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 8 months ago
Every rolling tumbleweed...
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
thank you for always seeing beyond the surface
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Reminds me of Slow Hand by
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
the effects of global warming & CO2 increases on various food cr
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Underneath