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My life

My life

 

My life is like an autumn leaf,

Blown away by the windy breeze

As I fly apart from my roots

Autumn leaves would be totally strewn

Amongst rabble behind my lovely park

Where many lovers daily come

Trample and without a sound

They strip naked stark.

 

I was once a lovely leaf

Now but alas a crushed one

Of no use to anyone

 

The morning dew

Comes and moistens my lips

It beacons me to come alive

I am now trodden and sodden

Where can there be a new life?

 

As the morning wind blows

It takes me further, further away

In a ditch of eternal time

My shreds will nurture

None will be able to me suture.

 

Then the snow will bury me

None will ever remember

For I would be just

Another autumn leaf

There will be none left

To comfort

Ere it’s the month of December.

— loved, Oct 02, 2009

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Country/Region: ROU

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

This is an interesting poem. I like the theme, likening your life to that of an Autumn leaf is unique. Some of the lines felt forced and I tripped over them, this one, for example: They strip naked stark. Always, Cat
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

thanks

perchance i came and saw ur kind comment please do read some more u will like them i quite sure