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Oct 02, 2009
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Life far away yet close
Life far away yet close
And as my life to yours is pressed
all sense of stress dispersed,
and I am blessed
with calm of love, its gentle sweet caress
my arms draw tighter round your forms so bold
and my heart beats with yours;
no we're not old,
we're timeless,
ageless
here indulging our foothold in the hour
and from this bond are young as youth's great fire
of ecstasy,
desire
its flames lick round within
I fain could let you in
but you are far away
'twill be another day, another time,
when sun and moon have done their round
and sent your heart to mine
together there to dine
on loves fine wine
and feeling thus join heaven's soul divine.
— Nordic cloud, Oct 02, 2009
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lyz
16 years 8 months ago
On loves fine wine
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Faraway love...
Ink Dragon
16 years 8 months ago
Ann,
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Ann of Norway:
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
Takk alle sammen
adjei agyei-baah
16 years 7 months ago
Impressive
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you Sinnbadd
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ann