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That's not what I am really like

Would you like to come and hang out
In the bushes down by the roundabout
Oh Ok! You say you're not that type
Nor am I, that's not what I'm really like

How about we go down to the subway
Where you can stand and watch me spray
On the walls about our undying love
While the traffic passes up above

Would you like to go for a quick squeeze
Down to the park, over the back in the trees
I know how to treat a woman so fine
Got 10 fags and a screw top bottle of wine

Oh yeh, you said you're not that type
and I told you that's not what I am like
But well, I may now just try push my luck
Is there any chance of a cheap......

— Millage, Oct 02, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

good title, language usage is good, The beginning is great and so is the ending. Good theme. I think that these lines really stand out: Would you like to go for a quick squeeze Down to the park, over the back in the trees I know how to treat a woman so fine Got 10 fags and a screw top bottle of wine Always, Cat
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Millage

16 years 8 months ago

Thank you

Thank you cat, I am very flattered by your comments. You are too kind. Take Care Millage x
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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

Humbled

Alanna, I am extremely humbled by your kind words. I wouldn't say I am good at all. Just, according to a lot of people, have a very 'broad' imagination. Much love Millage x