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Oct 02, 2009
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That's not what I am really like
Would you like to come and hang out
In the bushes down by the roundabout
Oh Ok! You say you're not that type
Nor am I, that's not what I'm really like
How about we go down to the subway
Where you can stand and watch me spray
On the walls about our undying love
While the traffic passes up above
Would you like to go for a quick squeeze
Down to the park, over the back in the trees
I know how to treat a woman so fine
Got 10 fags and a screw top bottle of wine
Oh yeh, you said you're not that type
and I told you that's not what I am like
But well, I may now just try push my luck
Is there any chance of a cheap......
In the bushes down by the roundabout
Oh Ok! You say you're not that type
Nor am I, that's not what I'm really like
How about we go down to the subway
Where you can stand and watch me spray
On the walls about our undying love
While the traffic passes up above
Would you like to go for a quick squeeze
Down to the park, over the back in the trees
I know how to treat a woman so fine
Got 10 fags and a screw top bottle of wine
Oh yeh, you said you're not that type
and I told you that's not what I am like
But well, I may now just try push my luck
Is there any chance of a cheap......
— Millage, Oct 02, 2009
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Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello
Millage
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you
alanna_91
16 years 7 months ago
great use of language
Millage
16 years 7 months ago
Humbled