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Oct 01, 2009
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Songs of Songs: Danae and Her Story
Song of Songs : Danae and Her Story
[pt. 3]
When the gold first began to fall,
I thought my bright body had called it.
I thought its clenched light
Was drawn to my fist of light.
I thought that god
Must have spread my body
Gently on the ground,
And said,
.....you are the gravity of gold,
Gold will fall to you
.....gold will fall into you.
The shower tore into me like hail
[Mary, we know,
Each one of us
Let him enter our bodies]
And then the gold was inside me,
And it was teeth and it was tongue,
And it was molten
[and I had been waiting
So long for lava]
And it was hands with holes.
A shower of god.
He died like a star
And rained down on my bright body
And the shrapnel tore into me like hail
[Mary, we know,
Each one of us
Bore him and lost him.]
.....I spread her body gently
On the ground
.....you are the gravity of god,
....I will fall to you,
....I will fall into you.
I dream of you, he says.
I cannot forget....
My hands still seeth with your shape.
My heart wrestles an angel
All night long.
Many years of this....
The inside of my chest
Is beaten gold by now.
— Diatom Shells, Oct 01, 2009
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Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Shells
Dalton
16 years 8 months ago
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Diatom Shells
16 years 8 months ago
hi
Dalton
16 years 8 months ago
Dalton
Diatom Shells
16 years 8 months ago
dalton
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 8 months ago
All that glitters is not gold...
Diatom Shells
16 years 8 months ago
dale