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Oct 01, 2009
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My Abbreviated Vision
I listen to instrumentals to get a beat into my mentalso i can burrow deep into another soul with my lyrical abilities that you need indiscreetly within your lifeor you start to feel tingling strife which only you can decide on how to make the feelings start to subsideand for me its to light, stride, ride, and never fight but for others lie, fight, hide, and never try to feel happinesscause ignorance is bliss and some just cant handle the opposite of itbut for me i legitimately feel no need or necessity to hate on other living beings because we all feel differing needs that are uncontrollably taking control of you and me without any negotiatingso we all are living, debating on the world and many times hating due to unfair tragedies that logistically just don’t seem to be true functionalities that should need to happen and let that question be filled with the nonsense of heaven or a reverend who claims to be helping thembut we all know the informalities within the functionalities that are hindering in mobility of human beings thinking which is destroying destinies of righteous communities breathing freely with sufficient mobility unlike our societies that were all living in
but the future we can save if we start trying today without enticing horrible things but rather bringing exciting new ideas that speak to the children cause we have to fill them with proper knowledge or else were just killing them like our heritage due to stupid kidsso how can we stop this is the next the topic that I’m going to drop for all you kids who tell me to stopBut i don’t listen cause i have vision like the bush administration to lead this unwilling nation no wit patience so heres the abbreviationFirst, stop with the hatredSecondly, hold some patienceThird, give proper educationJust these three things could bring less degradation to our civilizationSo i stress to be the best at making money so i can help someone hungry or starving for proper nutrition or mental acquisitionCause its a sad place we live no matter who the person
but the future we can save if we start trying today without enticing horrible things but rather bringing exciting new ideas that speak to the children cause we have to fill them with proper knowledge or else were just killing them like our heritage due to stupid kidsso how can we stop this is the next the topic that I’m going to drop for all you kids who tell me to stopBut i don’t listen cause i have vision like the bush administration to lead this unwilling nation no wit patience so heres the abbreviationFirst, stop with the hatredSecondly, hold some patienceThird, give proper educationJust these three things could bring less degradation to our civilizationSo i stress to be the best at making money so i can help someone hungry or starving for proper nutrition or mental acquisitionCause its a sad place we live no matter who the person
— mdehe, Oct 01, 2009
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