Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

loved
loved
Oct 01, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Creator God

 

 

 

If there is a God

He must own the universe too

Some one out there

Is waiting for you

 

In the Ottawa museum

I saw a huge meteor

80 thousand years ago

Which landed on the earth?

 

It has all types of metals

Found on the earth

Particularly iron

That is magnetic

It controls the universe

If it be so

The universe is a vast resource

For the Human Mind

To research

 

We all have a small mind

There is a wonderful

Creator out there

Let’s go and find

— loved, Oct 01, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

More from this author

Critiques

L

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Okay, Okay

Dear desperate one. Lol. it is a good write and u have put a lot of thought into this and I agree that this world has a vastness of beauty, wonderment and it is allowed to keep its secrets of its creation. Well done on your write, look foreward to reading more of your work. Love Lyz. XX
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

my thanks

You are so kind Hope you will read the remaining ones I've poted . I'd love to read ur works too. Thanks