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Myopic Pig.

Over the last few years
I have learned to minimize my habits
my habits of verbalizing my seditious and repugnant unfiltered rants,
mainly because my mouth caused me a lot of unwanted friction
in the real world.
But people like you
(and you indeed know who you are)
continue to hack away at what used to be my patience.
Unbeknown as yet to you and your esteemed(!) colleagues,
everybody that comes in contact with you,
on any level,
has an immediate sense of enmity.
Five minutes in the same fucking room would send any person,
with an IQ higher than the lowest form of plant life,
over the formidable boundary of sanity.
Sometimes i even commend,
although doubt, your "friends" ability
to withstand your bigotry,
stupidity and stench (which by the way is paramount to all vile scents).
I'm so worn out
I'm so fucking tired
I can't even be bothered rhyming
But!
I have taken the time to think you up a title
"Gooch: the mortal stankpot",
and your friends "HEP A, B, and C".
I'd also like to thank you though,
for making me realize something i was obviously misinformed about before,
oh how frivolous and unwise i am,
I thought civilization had grown somewhat
from blatant racism, ideas of slavery,
narrow-mindedness and childish jokes about the colour of skins,
oh foolish me, inept i am thinking equality and multiculturalism are important faculties of today's society.
Here's an idea chump,
long before discussing your bigoted version of the climate of racial inequality in this country
it might occur to you to shower,
with soap(just to be specific),
before gracing us with your unintelligent, irrelevant,
misdirected, regurgitated desecration of our culture.
and in your own unoriginal words "if you don't like it, fuck off back home".
After all we're just a bunch of convicts.
fuckclump!
— Bosscombat, Oct 01, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

LMFAO … Omg we are just a

LMFAO ... Omg we are just a bunch of convicts lol aint we .... bloody great rant that guy at the petrol station pissed you right the fuck off lol aye ? lmao thanks for having me and snake to stay hun LOL and boring you guys are not, busy? yes,and we understand its just great to see you so much lately one good thing about being sick LOL:P Loved this rant LOL I can see you standing there seething lol he he love youuu big hugs of love and thank you Jay-knee 2bums ;)
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

u saw....driving makes me rage lol and he made me rage from the moment i laid eyes on him and then it just got worse lol ♣
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Yay

I do love Australia. And I can hear you roar, loud and clear.Makes me think of a comment I was going to leave someone the other day but declined. Well done and glad to hear u roar. Love Lyz. XX
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

thanks lyz never ever censor yourself for the sake of others sensibilities. it robs them of many things...mainly their sense of truth and if they dont like what you say... they can deal and then come here and write a poem about it. just like me :p ♣
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Wow!

I don't think I would ever want to be on the other end of one of your rages! I too am sick to death of the people who think they are better than others due to the color of their skin, religion, etc.. It makes me real pissed that they can't understand that we all collectivly are what is called 'Mankind' There are too many people, [and I use the word loosely] who think that they alone have the right to be here, there or anywhere. I respect everyone's right to an opinion, but when it comes to wether or not, I or anyone belong wherever, I would say to them, we all belong here on this earth. Anywhere we choose! No matter who you are, you came from somewhere other than where you are now. Man has emigrated from place to place on this world. We did not spring up in different places at the same time. We all come from one stock, and have evolved into different people and cultures. It is said by some scientists and researchers that if 80% of the people in the KKK were to look at their family tree closely, they would find either Jewish or African DNA in their blood, and within the last 100 yrs. LOL Anyways, I applaud your rant. ~ Gee
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

i feel somewhat

i feel somewhat hypocritical. just for the fact that lets face it racist people are kind of a race in themselves and i cannot tolerate them I'm narrow minded in that sense but i guess they weren't born into hate they learned it its something they can change or atleast keep to themselves im glad people agree with me though lol thanks for the comment :) ♣
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

I loved your rant... There has been many a time that I would have loved to have your eloquence and skill with words to respond to a bigoted, religiously arrogant, know-it-all @sshole (including the ones in my family.) Usually I get so angry that I am tongue-tied. I'm so glad that I read this. You... are beautiful, man. Always, Cat
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

haha its easier to be

haha its easier to be eloquent when your writing :P although i wouldn't really call this eloquence. im so glad you read this also :) thank you very much for your kind words :)
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Boss...

those pigs are everywhere it seems... always someone trying to show how they are the one true race or creed, religion or non, like Geezer said here... we all make up the term of Mankind, and each is but a drop in the bucket. great rant dude! totally enjoyed it! Richard
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

they do seem to be everywhere all shapes all sizes. its the downright idiotic ones i can't stand and there's a lot of them haha thanks for reading man :) and congrats on your new position ♣ pea ess. i voted for you :p