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Sep 29, 2009
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What about our feelings
This is how we felt,
The way you feel, we felt last year.
My heart’s finally thawing,
And the way we felt slowly becomes clear.
This is what we felt,
The way we felt, this is how it feels,
I hated the way you talked down to me,
Your hypocrisy gave us the chills
This is how we felt,
The way we felt, you’re going to feel,
I’m tired of living a life in fear,
Alas, how we felt, will now be revealed.
This is what we’re feeling,
That, “WE’RE NO LONGER ABLE TO FEEL!”
My hopes and dreams, you’ve destroyed,
Our aspirations, ALL OF THEM, you've killed!
— marich7, Sep 29, 2009
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weirdelf-test
16 years 8 months ago
forgive me if I'm wrong,
marich7
16 years 8 months ago
it's not about obama
weirdelf-test
16 years 8 months ago
ah,