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Sep 29, 2009
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Neon Light
Waiting in the early hours by the
silent tracks I await the light to
appear at the end of the
long dark tunnel
Cool fresh air that brushes against
my face awakens me - to feel so
alive I breathe in the fresh air
before it gets spoiled by
the traffice of the day
that still sleeps
I listen to the tracks as they call to me
their melody sings the rail vibrates
you can hear the rolling stock in
the distance now approaching
bright neon lights glow
in the darkness
Smell the damp earthiness lifted
as a cool breeze flows gently
I see the light at the end
of the tunnel
silent tracks I await the light to
appear at the end of the
long dark tunnel
Cool fresh air that brushes against
my face awakens me - to feel so
alive I breathe in the fresh air
before it gets spoiled by
the traffice of the day
that still sleeps
I listen to the tracks as they call to me
their melody sings the rail vibrates
you can hear the rolling stock in
the distance now approaching
bright neon lights glow
in the darkness
Smell the damp earthiness lifted
as a cool breeze flows gently
I see the light at the end
of the tunnel
— Electric Blue, Sep 29, 2009
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Critiques
orgami
16 years 8 months ago
this is beautifully written
Electric Blue
16 years 8 months ago
Neon Light
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Just Beautiful magz I nearly
Electric Blue
16 years 8 months ago
Neon Light
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Electricblue.
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
neon light
Electric Blue
16 years 6 months ago
Neon Ligh