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No Mail Today 342 views wow

 

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People read but gloss on
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so that poets 
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NAIVE  ones like me
don't lament

No Mail Today

 

As I open my profile

I find it totally empty

Even if there are

Other’s messages in plenty

 

You didn’t send one today

How is it you forget to play?

When you don’t send

Your feelings by email

I feel like a dog

Without a tail,

Then a poem

I need to compose

One exclusively for you

I suppose.

 

When to you I do it post

Do you happily smile?

Like I think you would

All that wee, wee while

 

Would you be flying?

To kiss me

Just kiss me

Perhaps

If you could

Or you would be just

Pulling my leg

You rather would.

 

Now its time we went along

On our own diverse ways

My love is scattered

In the woods of life

My ego is very much

Bloated today

 

You have Cancer of your ego

As you say

 Now I want from you

To stay away

No, no, I’m just joking,

It’s my way of expressing

Love

Silently

When will you now come next?

My love again

On some flimsy pretext

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Sep 29, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

I am your kite

"I have no mail today" I don't know who wrote that letter from Afghanistan but for today, I am your kite electrified, let go and hanging on a tree, left to fend for myself blending with the falling Aspen leaves, praying for a gentle winter. ~A Thank you,.
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

thanks for comments

THANX Kite ur great thanx for the appreciation ur welcome to read more thanx
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

MY MIND

Please do read MY MIND and kindly let me have ur views too thanks
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

THANKS

SILENCE IS GOLD As far as aliens are concerned We present days’ microbial or microbes or bacterial human beings have, ourselves come from distant planets. I did a research into the human mind for over many years. Though I was born on a dark night But twas certainly not last nite. Do you know why Avatar did not get any Oscar no??? Nor do I Except that Hindu mythology Needs to be investigated In my own perception, As I read all religions well Which are all are man made
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Loved ...

This really is pognantly beautiful ... that first line reminds me of a song by Bobby Vinton Mr lonely lol I am a music teacher and I think that was way before i was born but there is a line in it that says 'letters I get no letters in the mail' beautiful old song that i was reminded of by your beautiful poem .... love and hugs Jayne :)
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

thanks

thank you for ur NO MAIL TODAY COMMENT I simply write off the cuff and move on thanx again
loved

loved

16 years 7 months ago

poems

Hello have u read any other poems? Do read NIAGARA FALLS U WILL LIKE IT Thankx
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

SILENCE IS GOLD

As far as aliens are concerned We present days’ microbial or microbes or bacterial human beings have, ourselves come from distant planets. I did a research into the human mind for over many years. Though I was born on a dark night But twas certainly not last nite. Do you know why Avatar did not get any Oscar no??? Nor do I Except that Hindu mythology Needs to be investigated In my own perception, As I read all religions well Which are all are man made
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks to u

ur views please My pet subjects are Love, Sex, Kiss As I claim to be a specialist I still do not know, KISSES SEX AND LOVE What love is? Do you know? You may perhaps Read all my Kiss and love poems To make an anthology Then perhaps you can take Some more time To learn about Love and kisses Then you needn't ask me As its been a long time Since any one read thee
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

HELLO ALL FRIENDS

THIS IS MY MOST WELL READ POEM HERE AS A NEOPOETS CONTENT SO MANY READS I CAN'T IMAGINE HERES ONE FOR THE ROAD TOO English is a wavering language As it was snowing today And I lay in bed whiling my time away Some thoughts crossed my mind What errors in the English language Did I find None except that Its language is wavering Here it’s now worth sharing... Bent is bent Then we have Cent, dent, Skip f Then we have a gent H and j, also k kick away Maybe we can accept lent Ment, oh sorry it doesn’t fit in. Skip n, Skip o Pent is ok, Q Is totally out Rent will do Sent too, tent well ok, U is out Vent is in, Went, o yeah X and y and z We can’t fit in any where Getting back to ment Just amend to read it as ‘meant’. Hope the remaining homework You surely will do.
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

the most read poem of 2009 liked by so many thanks all
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

have u read any more

What Of Politicians They say A politician shakes Ones hand Prior to being elected Then he shakes Every ones confidence Once he is finally elected. The fault is not his Poor ones are we In our perception Hope also in Inaccurate evaluation A politician is a politician Everyone knows How can he look after everyone? I suppose. Except his own few That’s what I wish All of you knew But wait, Though I’m alone A politician I will never own
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Nicely done

theres no mail today. I like this one loved. It is very good. I got stuck a little on one line When to you it I post I had to reread it several times maybe if there were to be a comma in there somewhere I dont know. Just my little tweak here for you. Happy Weekend and 5 oclock will be here soon. Yippe Yiay Love Mona
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

i am grateful to u all for the keeness and kindness u show and hopefully some where a comma i shall place if u say so thanks i want to read u more but how to get to ur profile i'm yet not quite sure will you help me find my way around here once more
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Of course

Loved if you want to see a profile or read someones poetry or stories just click on their name underlined after the submitted by ---- the date and time and then you will be taken to their profile where you can read their poetry. PS And dont't forget the lonely list also. Magics02
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

that i know but if i want to go to a profile by name then what like i want to reach out to richards and or ann of norway how do i do it and also if i have a new comment on any of my poems how do i come to know thanks sorry for bothering you. to see ur comment i had to open all my poems
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Your not bothering me at all

Yes I see and I will pm you and give you more ideas to try to get to the poets and poems you like to read. Do you ever go into stream and click on that and you will find alot of people in there. Once you connect with someone then you can always add them to your buddlist and then open up that page and you will see the poems. Try to go back and read all about the site, there is a world of information on here and very easy to understand. With lots of practice you will get better at it. You never bother me so you can ask me anything. I will always answer. Magics02 you know I think I will go back to using my pen name again since your not the only one that could not find me here either. Thank you for bringing this up tonight. Magics02 is back!! LOL Have a great weekend. Chillaxe and write..:)
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks again

thanks a lot and have a great day tooo where r u from in any case we from canada
M

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Florida

Canada have many friends there and cousins and Aunts that live there. Will look for you and read your writes as I am able to. Did you get to find out how to get to profiles or poems yet on here? Keep reading there is alot of great information on here for all. Magics02
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

getting some hang except when does one come to know when there is a comment i perchance opened my poem and read ur this comment
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

read me

thanks ur friends can read 2270 poems writtten this year on www.triond.com as lovelyhoney TWO POEMS COMPOSED JUST NOW The evening As the evening of my life Approaches The shadows of the sun Encroaches. I look taller Than I actually am The long spectrum o’er The setting sun, Beckons me to come. As I move closer Towards the horizon The evening of my life I feel has now finally come. Wait the sun smiles, As your evening does arise I shall elsewhere Like the dawn of humanity Also shall, As usual rise. Let all others surmise. Oh poet of the 21st century Rise Take the world by storm If not surprise Rise Rise Rise The evening of your life Hath come but gone away One more evening Time, Commands you to stay. Come, come, come As time beckons You to come I seek of thee to come Come you must Come all way Until you yourself don’t betray Come in my life any way Do come my way When you come, My dear do come The right way As time should not betray Come when its time Do then come Straight and fast your own way.
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

my mind and myloney heart

my mind has been posted MY LONELY HEART I SHALL POST IN NEXT DAYS QUOTA PLEASE DO KINDLY READ AND COMMENT THANKS
M

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Loved

How are you today and do you mind telling me about your photo? I know it is a picture of art and an not quite get what it is. I like your poems and just consider this keep a writing your hearts content. loved, magics02
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

thanks

thanks for reading and commening the snap is a pictorial at a New Yorks entrance to some building
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

loved one

i have changed my snap as most of the poets out here did not like it
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Loved:

The way you write and express your sentiments tells me you are a woman, and young and pretty. Excellent poem you have here, and I believe is deserving of a nice comment, and some stars. Great work, Sincerely, Hugo
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

beautiful thanks FRIEND

Man woman, Male female, Girl or boy, Hetro or bi, Homo or lesbian, Have just no co-relation To poetry composition. It’s all in ones mind, How one finds The emotions Squirt or spurt, Its all upto you, As long as you Read my poems and enjoy them too I shall always Thank you, Thank you, Thank you
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

just a VALANTINE DAY POEM

JUST A VALENTINE DAY POEM ONLY FOR APPRECIATION Roses of a Valentine Love…. I waited in the garden where I live, all long the whole silent day, longing that he will pass, this lovely Valentine day and to me surely hello he’ll say. But the day is nearing its end, there is neither a bell boy nor a card did he send. But my hopes are pinned On the rows of roses Those are red, We all know. The petals are soft too, That’s a great show. But a rose in ones’ hand Is an indication? Of a likelihood of lovely reunification When shall come my chance, to a Valentine be, instead of infatuation When will someone a red rose present to me, Today I turn sixteen This February fourteen, Will someone send? A basket of roses my way Just for name, If not for love sake Just for my lovely Valentine day. Ah! There comes Sam with a rose, Perhaps from his elder brother I suppose, But the dear guy smiles and passes by, If he hadn’t the rose to give me, Why did the guy come, just tell me? He did come I don’t know why, then as I was about to go away, running, towards me was Sonny. Panting, smiling, sighing, laughing, crying, and sweating, Hardly could he wait to say, come my Valentine, it’s our biggest day today. This rose I had sent for you But Sammy wanted himself to woo, So when I learnt of his game, I couldn’t wait, I am late, forgive me Please be my Valentine, not for now But all my life, I promise to make you My loving wife If you desire you may Kiss me, Kiss me, Kiss me, But my Lovely one, Don’t you ever miss me!
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

SILENCE IS GOLD

As far as aliens are concerned We present days’ microbial or microbes or bacterial human beings have, ourselves come from distant planets. I did a research into the human mind for over many years. Though I was born on a dark night But twas certainly not last nite. Do you know why Avatar did not get any Oscar no??? Nor do I Except that Hindu mythology Needs to be investigated In my own perception, As I read all religions well Which are all are man made LOVED ONE ITS ME