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No Mail Today 342 views wow
342 views
but not made it to even EVOLUTION
SOMEHOW THATS WHAT WAS MY BLOG
comment on and about
and all did commentnegatively at me.
People read but gloss on
they should be advised
to commment
so that poets
simpler
NAIVE ones like me
don't lament
No Mail Today
As I open my profile
I find it totally empty
Even if there are
Other’s messages in plenty
You didn’t send one today
How is it you forget to play?
When you don’t send
Your feelings by email
I feel like a dog
Without a tail,
Then a poem
I need to compose
One exclusively for you
I suppose.
When to you I do it post
Do you happily smile?
Like I think you would
All that wee, wee while
Would you be flying?
To kiss me
Just kiss me
Perhaps
If you could
Or you would be just
Pulling my leg
You rather would.
Now its time we went along
On our own diverse ways
My love is scattered
In the woods of life
My ego is very much
Bloated today
You have Cancer of your ego
As you say
Now I want from you
To stay away
No, no, I’m just joking,
It’s my way of expressing
Love
Silently
When will you now come next?
My love again
On some flimsy pretext
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
I am your kite
loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanks for comments
loved
16 years 3 months ago
MY MIND
loved
16 years 3 months ago
THANKS
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Loved ...
loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 7 months ago
poems
loved
16 years 3 months ago
SILENCE IS GOLD
loved
16 years 5 months ago
thanks to u
loved
16 years 5 months ago
HELLO ALL FRIENDS
loved
16 years 5 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 4 months ago
have u read any more
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Nicely done
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Of course
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Your not bothering me at all
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks again
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Florida
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 4 months ago
read me
loved
16 years 3 months ago
my mind and myloney heart
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Loved
loved
16 years 3 months ago
thanks
loved
16 years 2 months ago
loved one
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Loved:
loved
16 years 3 months ago
beautiful thanks FRIEND
loved
16 years 3 months ago
just a VALANTINE DAY POEM
loved
16 years 3 months ago
SILENCE IS GOLD