Love-Spell

I really thank you for your comments as I so nearly didn't post this one due to not being sure it worked, now I am glad I did. I did struggle with it but I am glad that struggling 'paid off'. Nothing wrong with it (blushes)...my first perfect love poem...oh! that just won't do, I have a dark 'hooded stranger' reputation to keep up! LOL! Thanks Cat, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Ziggy, you caught me! I was hoping you'd miss this one and still think I was a mean and nasty dark poetry writer! I just couldn't give this one a sad ending. I am pleased you liked my 'different' write. Thanks for reading and commenting my friend, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Thanks for your comment, I am still adjusting to this style of poem for me! cheers, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

I do tend to write from a darker perspective on life, but this one was keen to be shared. It is a short ride to Hell, but it is a long long road back. Normal service will resume later in the week with some dark gothic, sad and painful words! Thank you for writing, I do appreciate it, kindest regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Yeah my image of the dark hooded strange one is slipping! I am not actually comfortable writing this sort of poem...it feels forced, whereas my alternative topics seem to flow easier and I prefer writing them. This took a 'spotlight' session for a while, which again goes against the grain for me...I wasn't actually sure what spotlight meant, however as soon as I saw what it meant, I quickly nominated the others around me to move them up and above. You can't be a hooded stranger with the lights shining on you out in the open. 5 stars as well...I must try harder! Hope you are feeling better my friend, Thanks for writing and glad to see your poem went into the spotlight and dropped me down a few places. Take care and chat again soon, HS ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

I am charging a high fee for my love-spell, it is difficult to make and doesn't always work...I'll see about getting you a discount my friend. Hungry for love!...I hope my poem was food for thought for a while, regards and thanks for writing, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

A yummy poem...that really isn't the word to use for the hooded stranger...try yukkie!! LOL! Elegant, gentle soft and sweet! - I must return to my darker style! Thanks for your comments, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Glad you thought so...it seems more people like this type of poem than my usual stuff...shame! regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Firstly thank you for looking at it from an editing point of view, no changes, that is good to hear. A change of track does seem to have created a few more responses than normal...I'll work on some more like this but it does not come naturally to me, however the positive comments has given me confidence to try some more like this. Spotlight...hmmm I am not comfortable with 'spotlight' I prefer to keep away from the limelight/spotlight and just post discreetly. I am a human...that is a relief! Thanks for reading and commenting, regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

An interesting comment about rhythm, is it the verses or the chorus that throws you, I only ask because this was written to a tempo as it will be used as a song and has already been recorded as a demo, where the timing and tempo were matched perfectly? Thanks for the comment, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".