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I WILL LET YOU FALL
"I will let you fall
as if in slow motion -
tumbling and turning through
tumultuous clouds
of emotion
from the edge of reason -
descending slowly, deeper,
into passion’s possessive
grip -
I will let you slip
I will save you
as if by Grace -
ordained by Venus
before she knew
time or place.
As none before
expansive, enlightened
piercing the carapace
of your hardened core -
I will love you
I will feed your soul
from the bounty of excess
filling your mind - bathing your body
with the softest caress.
Alas! Again and again
my longing I must subjugate
lest my heart and soul I alienate...
Perhaps someday
the pleasures of loving you will subside
For now Fate has writ ... it must be denied.
More than sunlight shines,
or the moon’s reflection
memories magnify -
I shall miss you.
BjR September 27 '09
Critiques
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Poignantly beautiful Boni
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Jayne dearest!
Michael Anthony
16 years 8 months ago
Boni J!
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Mike!
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Dear K!
Ink Dragon
16 years 8 months ago
Boni,
Bonitaj
16 years 8 months ago
Danke Nina