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Sep 29, 2009
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From Rage To Passion
Blood soaked body
Flesh filled claws
Slashing, crashing
Through the forest brush
Smell of smoke and burning slut
That stupid bitch should have
Kept her mouth shut
To lair she flew
Feet barely touching dirt
Going to rip that bastard
From his shirt
Inside the open mouth
She stood
He waited in contempt
Surly face, hair unkempt
Face to face
They stood
Seething, bleeding
Droplets of betrayal
Splattering the floor
She reaches out to slap his face
Raking one lone claw
From eye to chin
As the socket dangles, she grins
He'll think twice before looking again
Grabbing her by the hair
He pulls her down
Looking at her with a sinister frown
Four eyes flaming red
As her tears hit their bed
Dragging her to the feaux mattress
Of leaves and twigs
Angrily she fights
Biting his fingers, chewing them with her fangs
He throws her down and stands over her
In all his masculanity
Rudely she spits his own flesh
Dead in his torn up face
As he crouches in front of her
Tearing already mangled clothes
She punches him in the nose
Bones cracking
Such a sweet revenge
Hands to throat
She cuts his oxygen off
Quickly remembering
He is undead
Rolling, battering and screaming
The battle plays on
Violent drums beat a vicious song
When finally he pins her
Pounding and shoving
She takes it all in
Chanting curses
As he gives it to her again
The night has ended
Tempers somewhat cooled
Will they ever be the same
Or are their emotions just fooled?
From Rage To Passion, when Love and Hate hold hands.....Can this raw and violent union be saved...only the Devil knows....ask him if you dare.....
Flesh filled claws
Slashing, crashing
Through the forest brush
Smell of smoke and burning slut
That stupid bitch should have
Kept her mouth shut
To lair she flew
Feet barely touching dirt
Going to rip that bastard
From his shirt
Inside the open mouth
She stood
He waited in contempt
Surly face, hair unkempt
Face to face
They stood
Seething, bleeding
Droplets of betrayal
Splattering the floor
She reaches out to slap his face
Raking one lone claw
From eye to chin
As the socket dangles, she grins
He'll think twice before looking again
Grabbing her by the hair
He pulls her down
Looking at her with a sinister frown
Four eyes flaming red
As her tears hit their bed
Dragging her to the feaux mattress
Of leaves and twigs
Angrily she fights
Biting his fingers, chewing them with her fangs
He throws her down and stands over her
In all his masculanity
Rudely she spits his own flesh
Dead in his torn up face
As he crouches in front of her
Tearing already mangled clothes
She punches him in the nose
Bones cracking
Such a sweet revenge
Hands to throat
She cuts his oxygen off
Quickly remembering
He is undead
Rolling, battering and screaming
The battle plays on
Violent drums beat a vicious song
When finally he pins her
Pounding and shoving
She takes it all in
Chanting curses
As he gives it to her again
The night has ended
Tempers somewhat cooled
Will they ever be the same
Or are their emotions just fooled?
From Rage To Passion, when Love and Hate hold hands.....Can this raw and violent union be saved...only the Devil knows....ask him if you dare.....
— hardcorechick28, Sep 29, 2009
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Critiques
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Much Better...
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
thank you.....
press
16 years 8 months ago
Carrie
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
if i was...
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
What a ride
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
thank you very much
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
=)
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
yes she did....
KINGZOMBIE
16 years 8 months ago
BLOOD, VIOLENCE, REVENGE
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
violence is my gift...
Pumpkin123s
16 years 4 months ago
Hello