STUPID OR IGNORANCE

I like where you are going with this... I do have a couple of suggestions, compendious in this form is an adjective, but I believe you wanted to use it as a noun... lacking the compendiousness (my spell check is red lining this but I looked it up in the dictionary because it didn't sound right to me) Pass (past) my own finite ( my own finite what?) great word choices here Press! deep thinking! Richard

You have the beginnings of a powerful poem here ... I agree with Richards suggestions on this one and will keep my eye open for updates and will reserve my vote till then hun ... you take care love and higgest bugs Jayne x x

You are on a roll my friend,keep up the good work. Love from Lyz. XX

I am doing fine, thank you for asking. I do hope all is well in your home with you and your family... I read somewhere that the boy in your latest picture is your grandson... they are a joy! In my house "stupid" is a bad word. My kids are not allowed to use it. To me the word indicates an unwillingness to learn, ignorance is quite different, indicating the as yet learned... thank you for explaining where you were going with the sentence, but it still seems not right to me... pass (verb) unless it is used like this... let's head em off at the pass(noun) finite... can be used as a noun, but usually it is an adjective. past my own finite capabilities. I looked over the added part to the poem and there were some words where the wrong tense was used... passion... passionate or impassioned explain... explained I do like what you are saying here, you will not find me in the dictionary either, but the words to describe our lives and share are there. enjoyed reading and thinking about this poem both times Press, and most likely will come back again... thanks! Richard

Just taking your original poem, and dissecting it, I find a world of meanings, but my impression is mixed because I find contradiction in your message. (perhaps it is just the way I read and interpreted the poem). I think the idea I get is really good, we can not be 100% or know 100% the mind of someone else, and we will not always see the way others view all things. I hate to think any of us have a predetermined limit though. I think we can surpass what we believe is possible in ourselves. I should probably apologize for breaking down some of yours words, at times that changes meaning the writer means to set, but I find it easier for me to get my brain around sometimes. I don’t think you necessarily need to complicated of words to get your point across either. Sometimes, they get more in the way of what you are trying to say. I guess I will always be dense Ignorant, lacking comprehension To judge with meaning Delegate (assign) Meliorate (improve) Pass beyond my own (predetermined limits) finite I will not reserve (hold back) I will not profess (admit) I will never have the capacity (ability) To archive (store), the mentality (state of mind) Of another human being -maybe you should say: I will reserve I will profess I will never have the capacity To archive the mentality Of another human being … ? (the two 1st lines in the 2nd stanza of your poem is my thought of contradiction to the rest of the stanza.) and I don’t know I would use the title.. I don’t believe it is ignorance to profess the inability to store the mentality of another within ourselves. I would think it is more of an awareness of individuality, an awareness of differences… lol, just thoughts for you to muse upon. Thank you for making me think on these words you present. Food for thought, for sure! Always, Tonya