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Sep 29, 2009
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Song of Songs [pt. 1]
Song of Songs
[pt. 1]
They built the girl
Around a rib of want.
It is her axis.
She cannot see it,
But she can feel its spear.
Her eyes
Look like they were exhaled.
God wears fire,
And her red mouth is his hem.
I wrote this girl into a sentence of want,
And now she will burn forever.
You will open to this page
Years from now
And she will still be here,
Her lips parted
And her breath unbraided,
Trembling inside the words
Until the vowels shimmer.
There are many like her,
Caught inside a sentence,
Waiting, waiting.....
When the world finally ends,
They will come so hard
That their angels will break
On the racks of their bodies.
— Diatom Shells, Sep 29, 2009
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Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Shells