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Sep 28, 2009
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The Other Side Of Me
When I look into the mirror
What do I see?
A girl with a face like mine,
Making fun of me.
She tells me I am a weakling,
That I have a spine of a jellyfish
And to stand up and defend my self,
Is her only wish.
But there is more to her than that,
You can see the devil in her eyes
And all this rubbish about sticking up for me
Is just a bad disguise.
She wants to completely destroy,
All that has done us wrong,
She truly believes that if you dont conquer and kill
It proves that you aren't strong.
But the things she tells me to do,
Sends a shiver down my spine
I cannot believe that evil girl's
Thoughts are the same as mine
She laughs at me and sneers
Throwing me looks of pure disgust
"If I am going to help you "she snarls
"Then obey me, you know you must"
So I avoid every mirror, for I refuse to see
The carnage I am capable of, the other side of me.
What do I see?
A girl with a face like mine,
Making fun of me.
She tells me I am a weakling,
That I have a spine of a jellyfish
And to stand up and defend my self,
Is her only wish.
But there is more to her than that,
You can see the devil in her eyes
And all this rubbish about sticking up for me
Is just a bad disguise.
She wants to completely destroy,
All that has done us wrong,
She truly believes that if you dont conquer and kill
It proves that you aren't strong.
But the things she tells me to do,
Sends a shiver down my spine
I cannot believe that evil girl's
Thoughts are the same as mine
She laughs at me and sneers
Throwing me looks of pure disgust
"If I am going to help you "she snarls
"Then obey me, you know you must"
So I avoid every mirror, for I refuse to see
The carnage I am capable of, the other side of me.
— greeneyes, Sep 28, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf-test
16 years 8 months ago
Do some carnage, my dear
yenti
16 years 8 months ago
Green Eyes
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hey dear girl
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
thank you