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Sep 27, 2009
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Simply love me
Simply love me
The night was young
I was turning in bed
You lay besides me instead
Quietly you were dreaming too
This I knew
You were too dreaming
I know about whom
As my dream extended
Into your domain
I saw you in my arms remain
The whole night passed
But nothing happened
We held our hand
In extreme silence
But that was not
What I thought would be
In the morning
When I got up
All over wet
That was I wished
You could see
— loved, Sep 27, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello
loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanx