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Final Touch

 

 

Final touch

I long for your touch,

Touch me my dear,

When we are both near

For when the light’s out,

You’ll never know

What I meant

Before I did go

 

Touch me no

For it’s the need of the hour

No medicine

No visitors

None else indeed

No doctor

But you my love

I now need.

 

Feel me before this smouldering fire.

Extinguishes…

 

It’s now only or never

For ever

Touch me please;

‘Twill comfort my soul

It’s only softness

Petal touch untold

That’ll help me

Traverse my final goal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Sep 26, 2009

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Darya

16 years 8 months ago

I like this poem ………..

I like this poem ........... that is what we all sometimes need ......... a gentle touch .... and then most of the time we are even deprived of that ........ darya
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

thank the stars

you give my poetry life i give it my touch soon i shall read urs once i get the hang of this site hope u will bear with me till then thanks
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

HAPPY BDAY POEM

''Pisces… Happy… Birthday'' Please do remember me all my friends, I am the one, who a poetic greeting does send, So how can you not remember every Piscean? Can you deny me my rightful place? All I want in return my dear-fish, Ever in your hearts’ a loving dish, Never to be forgotten, till an Hbyday I wish.
loved

loved

16 years 7 months ago

thanks

thanks for the stars thanx
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Silent_Rain

16 years 1 month ago

:)(:

Awww!! Its kinda sad... or at least, what I got from it is sad, Like someone dying longs for nothing more then one last touch from his lover... Aww!! ~Rain~ There's always a rainbow after the rain...
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

ur that rainbow where r u do let me know i shall then come over to bow