One day I'll steal the moon

Beautiful! Superb title!!! (May make a couple of tweakings?) One day i’ll steal the moon from above I won’t take the sun, let it stay! One day i’ll take your heart full of love, you can keep the lust, that’s ok. One day i’ll pluck the red cherry atop the cake The filling is yours for you to keep One day i’ll make a choice I won’t mistake then no errors will haunt my sleep One day i’ll paint a rainbow, stretch it across the sky and the crock of gold, a present, i’ll leave for you One day i’ll make a promise you'll not ask why in hope high and wide, you'll believe it is true One day i’ll sing a truly beautiful song And I won't keep it hidden away One day i’ll feel like I really DO belong when, I really cannot say… (but you'll have heard my voice.) Just some thoughts...for you to move around... or not.... ~A

And thank you for not using any of my 'tweakings'. lol It is perfect as is though you *should* give up smoking. ;-) ~A

Nice poem ...... ................... i especially like this "One day I’ll take a choice that won’t be a mistake Until then my errors haunt my sleep " darya