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untitled No. 1111

Before the dogs of morning bark, when meringue clouds
float across a black-ink sky, I meditate earth's stillness.
I think about Beethoven, weary-eyed, counting candles
in his Moonlight Sonata
I wonder about some things: who will find those
who have died quietly, without so much as a whimper
the babies and mothers and soldiers, frozen in parables
of songs, wandering about breathless in their eternal sleep.
I wonder about our spinning world, so precious with life,
will the seasons of a heart bear fruit, sweet as a mango,
licked from a lover's mouth?
Will the columbine climb with the morning glory, golden honeysuckle
and ballerina rose, reach the stars beyond Redwood forests
looming like sentinels of time?
Will there be a day before the end of the world?
Before the clamor of colour rolls into the horizon with the
breaking light?

I dreamed last night of a vast army,
rows and rows of the number 1, falling down, one after
another, forming a skybridge for me to cross.

The melody of distance shatters all 'round,
I am thankful for a warm blanket on a cold morning.


— Kailashana, Sep 26, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Anna

My dream is to one day write a quarter as good as you ... everytime I read one that surprises me I think it cant happen again, and then you go and do it again lol you'd think I would be used to it by now but i never am and its like a gift everytime I read a new poem of yours (hugs) A brilliant work and I can see it all in technicolour ... beautifully done ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 8 months ago

You throw out these little beautiful thoughts that FLOWER Anna

Oh "The melody of distance shatters all ‘round, " I like that and would that it were not so far away! And even you have good dreams, I do too, when others awake in fright, I wish I could just finish mine. And I too have dreamed something like this with something forming a way round the whole world, I wonder what it is? I once posted the story on the forum here but nobody commented for so long that I took it away. I thought it had something special about it too! "each the stars beyond Redwood forests looming like sentinels of time? " " meringue clouds float across a black-ink sky" " frozen in parables of songs," "wandering about breathless in their eternal sleep. " "golden honeysuckle and ballerina rose," "I meditate earth’s stillness." "I wonder about our spinning world," You throw out these little beautiful thoughts that FLOWER before our eyes to our surprise and make us feel happy, and sometimes sad but always alive and in some beautiful place this earth. Love you Anna and love from me.
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bjp

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Anna,

Terrific ideas contained in this poem. I have made off with one. I am using the line "sweet as as a mango, licked from a lover’s mouth" as the title to my latest poem. I have still to attribute it. Brian
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Ha! I’ve had an affair

Ha! I've had an affair with Mr. Mango, Brian for a very long time, I posted the poem Mango, here some time ago, with a little bit of help from my friends here it was tweaked *to perfection*. It had already been published at an ezine without the added improvement and wish I could go back to change it. One of the first poems I ever wrote after 25 years away from poetry was about a mango, running down your mouth corners... and your lover slowly licking it off and.... Mango, I shall have an affair with you....http://www.neopoet.com/node/9389 Enjoy. Hugs. Anna
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Arrow

16 years 8 months ago

Curious

that we're inclined to think we will cross the skybridge, rather than be a rung on it.