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Neo Rainbow

So many colours
within the neopoet
are the rainbows here


It's brightness glows
glimmers the kaleidoscope
all shapes such patterns evolve
such wonderment still  to behold


The soft brown earth
each seed cradled nurtured
steadily grows young and old
who can say what will be fortold


Our Neo tree
its branches open
spread out open arms
welcomes all short or tall


tenderly we listen
we watch and grow
many night owls here
that I have come to know


Such wisdom many impart
to all of us with wounded heart
we all have sorrows that we regret
love flows meanders slowly to the sunset



Electric blue
— Electric Blue, Sep 26, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Magz

This is light and happy and wonderful ... I loved it and your poem is very true there are all the colours of the rainbow here and dont we blend so well (hugs) love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 8 months ago

Neo Rainbow

Jayne I need some light in my darkness and I find it here the glow is so blinding at time but I am happy to find candle light burning bright. always hugs Electric Blue Magzxxx
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 8 months ago

A charming way to describe

A charming way to describe us, we are flattered and happy to know that we spread a little solace to those in need of such, that is a rewarding things to be allowed to do, would that we could do so to those is dire need who know not of us, we send them also our love. Rainbows to you Maggie, and the sun still rises in its gown of gold to shine on you. Love from Ann
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 8 months ago

Neo rainbow

Ann Neopoet is my light my only comfort it warms me I feel the glow of love here. Thank you Electric Blue
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 8 months ago

Neo Rainbow

Maggie, very nice tribute, your feelings shine through on this one! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous