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Sep 25, 2009
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Your eyes
Your eyes
The more I see
Into your snap,
The more I love your eyes,
The more they want
To me invite
The more I send
Messages to you,
The more love flows
From where to where
You know.
The more I think of you
How I wish,
I was that young as you.
But alas,
God has his own ways
To balance,
I once longed for one
As beautiful as you
— loved, Sep 25, 2009
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loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanks