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Your eyes

 

Your eyes

 

The more I see

Into your snap,

The more I love your eyes,

The more they want

To me invite

 

The more I send

Messages to you,

The more love flows

From where to where

You know.

 

The more I think of you

How I wish,

I was that young as you.

But alas,

God has his own ways

To balance,

I once longed for one

As beautiful as you

— loved, Sep 25, 2009

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16 years 8 months ago

thanks

thanks for ur lovely views and comments thanx again will keep in mind in future thanx