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Hot Pete

His name is
Hot Pete
although
I would not
date him
if you
paid me
he makes
an awful
lot of noise
when I
try to
turn him
on
clunkity clunk
so much
for modern
technology
although
he shares
a common
thread
with my
girl Macky
couldn't find
it in my
heart to
call him
Hewett
what other
name can
you come
up with
for a printer...

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Fleur

I love it when you turn the inanimate into things with character and personality another fresh piece from you hun I loved it ... great job as per the normal for lately :P love and higgest bugs Jayne x x
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 7 months ago

hey you

beautiful you, thanks baby, I was just thinking about you, how are you? I had to come in to vote and had some spare time to put up a poem, but I don't have any spare time today to read any poems, gotta go and do some art work. Love you always and thankyou again. xxxxxxxxxxxoooooooo:)fleur
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Hey back atcha (hug)

Have missed you,I am coming up for air after a hectic two weeks, starting to feel nearly human so thats a good sign lol ... good to see you, get your ass back here soon as you can,I miss reading you ((huggles)) mucho love Jayne x x x x