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Seren
Seren
Sep 25, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Soaring in Flames(Adult Content)

Enlisting the charms
of the fire,
with wistful music
I spoke from a lyre


I Entranced a beckoning
to his knees,
this bubbling lust
was slightly freed


A trail of whisper
licks my ear,
drawing me close
to hold me near


Touching a rose
tipped the peaks,
a burgeoning lust
is lightly tweaked


Unbuttoning need
in frenzied grasps,
ripping to free
a stubborn clasp


Fumbling fingers
brush and bump,
grinding of hips
begins the thump


Parting the thighs
that flamed the ache,
speared in the fire
that ripple’s to wake


Licking the ether
lining the why,
turning to jelly
lost in his eyes


A silent scream
in nature is heard,
as Ecstasy feeds
I fly like a bird


Peeling the layers
that shaded the orbs,
discovering bliss
as your taste is absorbed

 

 


 

— Seren, Sep 25, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Ello there stranger lol

;) cya tomorrow afternooooon :P love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x Edit I mean today pmsl (hugs) Jay-Knee 2 bums LOL
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Dear One

***** *Brings sweet memories to me. I.P. is a pain. A lovely poem, dear Jayne. My favorite lines are: A silent scream in nature is heard, as Ecstasy feeds I fly like a bird Peeling the layers that shaded the orbs, discovering bliss as your taste is absorbed BTW, what is pmsl? Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Cat

Awww I am glad this brought back memories for you ... and pmsl is piss myself laughing lol I do that a lot and snake was being cheeky he let me put this one on was giving it his stamp lol ... glad you liked it darlin' love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Liz

Love your new picture !! its awesome ... glad you liked this one LOL I ran it by hubby and he said yes when its ones like this one I think its polite to let him say yay or nay lol ... Nothing like voyeurism lol keeps the blood pumping , love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Hugo

LOL why ever not ??? hahahahha (hugs) thanks for the comment and the purdy stars ... I am gathering you liked it , yeah ? he he Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Am I being a voyeur or

Am I being a voyeur or something else? Yes!!!!! You and he & me make three. Ooops did I say that out loud? Hugs of love, Anna
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Anna

I just laughed my ass off lol couldnt help it your comment cracked me up :P:P nothing wrong with being a voyeur :O ... I am naughty back in my box lol .... Hugs of Love Jayne x x
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Orphani

16 years 8 months ago

human sexuality is among the

human sexuality is among the greatest joys we can experience, and you seem to be experiencing it to quite a degree.Keep the home fires burning. And send me a bag of that orange dust. Erotic, yet tastfuly done in your direct and honest style. Score one for the Aussie team ..........o
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Barry,

I think that human sexuality is the most basest of instincts ... and I like writing about them but I do try to be tasteful and mind the feelings of my partner , though sometimes for arts sake in other poems thats a different thing altogether ... I have free reign to write what i want, but when I write these ones I always run them past him before I submit and he gave his seal nof approval for this one so it must have been ok ... sending you a bad of red and orange dust lol your not gonna to believe it we are smothered in dust again :( I am so over this dust its making life difficult we cannot even wash the clothes, they get dirty on the line ... thanks for your comment its always good to know when they hit their target so to speak lol Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Whew!!!

I gotta go wash.... to paraphrase somone who once said that to me. You guys are... I love the way you do everything together. LOL ! Very tastefully done! ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Aha not everything ;)

Aha not everything ;) hahahaha thanks for the read Gee glad you'liked' it lmao gave me a giggle sorely needed one ... love and higgest bugs Jayne P.S hope your mumma had a lovely birthday and she enjoyed her poem my dads 80 next month soooo I know what its like when your parents are getting old he was in his fourties when I was born .... (hugs)
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Gee

I am so glad she had a good day,You give her a great big old bug from me and wish her happy birtthday belated though it is ... you take care Love ahigeest bugs Jayne x x
L

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

YOU TART

What have I been missing out on, bloody hell Jayne, leave you alone for a couple of days and this is what u get up to. Disgusting hot eroticism. I told you I want what your having.I will have to be the grown up here I think and give u what for. Creativity.-A+ Imagination.-A+ Spelling.-A+ Sharing- A -. Yes , minus you greedy girl. Now go stand in the corner. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Rotflmfao !!!!

I just got to newy about 6.30 tonight lol had to delay the trip a little I had a bad weekend am going to see the docter tomorrow , I near pissed myself laughing at your message LMAO !!! ya nutter ... I am sick not dead pmsl !!! and a girl like's a bit of something something hahahaha love ya hun ...you take care will give you a bell in the am or pm depending on when the eyelids open ... the boys just opened a bottle of bourbon and a bottle of scotch LOL its going to be a long night ... take care love and higgest bugs Jayne x x