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Sep 25, 2009
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Zen's Foreign Eyes
I see the one with uneven shoulders.
I see his sweater stained with eggyolk and God
knows what else.
I see the unpitied aggression
in his untied boots.
I see the brimmed hat
like a sweatshops'
knitted fangs.
I see spit,
I see Zebra cotton in
his smile.
I see his hurried leading nowhere,
I see the gaseous invisibility
of his intoxication.
I see the ampitheatre where he
will not pay.
I see the truck with a wide berth.
I see him hip it, nudge it, roll his
eyes.
I hear his gasping stories downtown,
later maybe,
perhaps tonight after being
struck by kids with
bottle rockets.
He thinks he hears mine
I see his sweater stained with eggyolk and God
knows what else.
I see the unpitied aggression
in his untied boots.
I see the brimmed hat
like a sweatshops'
knitted fangs.
I see spit,
I see Zebra cotton in
his smile.
I see his hurried leading nowhere,
I see the gaseous invisibility
of his intoxication.
I see the ampitheatre where he
will not pay.
I see the truck with a wide berth.
I see him hip it, nudge it, roll his
eyes.
I hear his gasping stories downtown,
later maybe,
perhaps tonight after being
struck by kids with
bottle rockets.
He thinks he hears mine
Comments
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
GB
infinite_dwarf
16 years 7 months ago
John
Quillsvein1
16 years 7 months ago
thank you Jess and Jayne
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
This