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My love must be alive

 I have brought songs for sale,Songs I wrote of youAnd of my love for you.Today they shall be auctioned.Paucity hasn’t reduced themTo sheer commodities;My death knell has done.Yes, they must be soldTo be kept safe after I die.15.03.2005 
— R.M.Shanmugam, Sep 25, 2009

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Darya

16 years 9 months ago

This is sweet

This is sweet ...... ......... simple and nice darya

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