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Sep 24, 2009
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memory
there are only wild berries here
and desolate grey sky. the ink
fading from my footsteps under
fields of honey locust leaves
the last wild geese honk goodbye
my orchids bloom 10 kisses.

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and desolate grey sky. the ink
fading from my footsteps under
fields of honey locust leaves
the last wild geese honk goodbye
my orchids bloom 10 kisses.
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— Kailashana, Sep 24, 2009
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Orphani
16 years 10 months ago
superb and enchanting - your
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you Barry much.~Ap.s.
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Anna
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Sweet Lady Jayne, Oh, you
Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
hello Anna
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
I can’t find the jpg I
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Hi Cat,I can’t find the
yenti
16 years 10 months ago
Anna
docmaverick
16 years 10 months ago
5 stars....
Nordic cloud
16 years 10 months ago
Anna, Lady of poetry's magic wands (Okay)
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you dear Ian, Doc and
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 10 months ago
Memory
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