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BREAD CRUMBS POETRY BECOMES

BREAD CRUMBS POETRY BECOMES

To analyze
Negotiates 
Complicates
Just let me be a poet
Just one poem to, communicate

Just let me be a poet
A jezebel of poetry
Seduced  to testify
To serve what I see
A writers slave of  the infidelity

My profile is
The bread crumbs I leave
Each title of my poems
Will make it clear to read

My promiscuous
Nature to improve
Expand my own world
I write ,to be more than I can be
Follow my bread crumbs and you  will see

Careless , incentives   .
Thrill seekers, my crumbs with be a lie
But to the scholars , searching for truth
My titles , are crumbs of bread for my life 

Ok to the readers .We poets post are poems in our profile . So question to us poets ? have you ever just looked at your
titles in the profile. Aren't they like bread crumbs , to mark chapters in our life. I think we all should just look at our titles 
once to take inventory [ bread crumbs] without reading the poem. This might give us a better prospective of where we are .
Is our poetry a clone of each other. Do we write about the same thing different words . [PLEASE NO ATTACKS ? I AM NOT SAYING THIS IS GOOD OR BAD] only relative, 



   
— press, Sep 22, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Press

You have written a great bit of bread crumbs here and you are very observant, I will check out my titles, but I see what you mean. We are all and one in this universe, whether some like it or not. We all think and write about things, as you say, in different words, and our experiences, loves , hates, fantasies, home life etc all have similarities. Yet I do know that with only a very minor handful of topics in life, that will never be alike, will always take presedence. Great words. Love Lyz. x
press

press

16 years 8 months ago

Lyz my friend

Lyz hey how are you ,in the down under. I have to commend you guys for your solidarity[ JC . jess and the others] in Australia . But I won't profile ? we are all poets. Lyz if you look over my titles you will see my bread crumbs. I am condemned [ and that not a bad thing , but a purpose]. OK lyz scene you have shown me love by reading my poetry [ OK Per say]. I will share some personal incites about me. We all wounder why we are here on this earth ,beyond having kids love etc. If a person finds their purpose in life , I don't know why but everything else finds it's place to. So that being said ? Lyz what if I said ,I have never read a book of poetry in my life. What if I said I have only been writing for about eight months [ more or less]. What if I said Lyz I am a TV guy I don't read books. So if you look at my poetry [ OK Lyz I don't have a ego about my poetry if I did I would not take the time to write all of this] Question how can I write like this , why do I write these poem . But the biggest question why me. logically I don't fit the profile of a poet. Has god called me to write poetry ,you add it up Lyz?. is this a purpose for me. All I can say is I am consumed , I have to write [ condemned to write] So the bread crumbs of a poet is our convictions , so if we just look at our titles we can see , how we are condemned. And maybe move forward in our life of poetry Press
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Press

You have impressed me, I think you have found your purpose in this gift of writing and so beautifully, I might add.I am privileged to share your sweet talent and I am glad such a sweet soul as yourself finds it in your heart to share with us. I thank u. Best wishes to you and yours. Love from Lyz. XX
press

press

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks Lyz, Annie, Kal,

What can I say. I am scared that one day I will evolve into the next phase of my life of poetry.So will I still be clean , pure , humble and the most important? will I still be connected to this Pressley with all the friends That I have you guys LOV2U PRESS PS. Kal your right I miss that spelling boo boo
DC

Darby Cain

16 years 8 months ago

encore

Darby Cain
Rett

Rett

16 years 8 months ago

Son, YES!

I think you have something. Bread crumbs fits perfectly. Good write, good analogy. I say that it is all Katie and Darby's fault though. They come around and scatter the crumbs after we write them. *LOL* Anyway, I loved it! a couple of grammatical errors, but all in all, you are getting really good. Respectfully, Rett: "When I was born I was so surprised I didn't talk for a year and a half." Gracie Allen
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 8 months ago

Bread Crumbs

press, This one broke my bread apart,into crumbs. I think this to be an awesome write! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous