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Sep 22, 2009
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BREAD CRUMBS POETRY BECOMES
BREAD CRUMBS POETRY BECOMES
To analyze
Negotiates
Complicates
Just let me be a poet
Just one poem to, communicate
Just let me be a poet
A jezebel of poetry
Seduced to testify
To serve what I see
A writers slave of the infidelity
My profile is
The bread crumbs I leave
Each title of my poems
Will make it clear to read
My promiscuous
Nature to improve
Expand my own world
I write ,to be more than I can be
Follow my bread crumbs and you will see
Careless , incentives .
Thrill seekers, my crumbs with be a lie
But to the scholars , searching for truth
My titles , are crumbs of bread for my life
Ok to the readers .We poets post are poems in our profile . So question to us poets ? have you ever just looked at your
titles in the profile. Aren't they like bread crumbs , to mark chapters in our life. I think we all should just look at our titles
once to take inventory [ bread crumbs] without reading the poem. This might give us a better prospective of where we are .
Is our poetry a clone of each other. Do we write about the same thing different words . [PLEASE NO ATTACKS ? I AM NOT SAYING THIS IS GOOD OR BAD] only relative,
To analyze
Negotiates
Complicates
Just let me be a poet
Just one poem to, communicate
Just let me be a poet
A jezebel of poetry
Seduced to testify
To serve what I see
A writers slave of the infidelity
My profile is
The bread crumbs I leave
Each title of my poems
Will make it clear to read
My promiscuous
Nature to improve
Expand my own world
I write ,to be more than I can be
Follow my bread crumbs and you will see
Careless , incentives .
Thrill seekers, my crumbs with be a lie
But to the scholars , searching for truth
My titles , are crumbs of bread for my life
Ok to the readers .We poets post are poems in our profile . So question to us poets ? have you ever just looked at your
titles in the profile. Aren't they like bread crumbs , to mark chapters in our life. I think we all should just look at our titles
once to take inventory [ bread crumbs] without reading the poem. This might give us a better prospective of where we are .
Is our poetry a clone of each other. Do we write about the same thing different words . [PLEASE NO ATTACKS ? I AM NOT SAYING THIS IS GOOD OR BAD] only relative,
— press, Sep 22, 2009
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lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Press
press
16 years 10 months ago
Lyz my friend
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Press
press
16 years 10 months ago
Thanks Lyz, Annie, Kal,
Darby Cain
16 years 10 months ago
encore
Rett
16 years 9 months ago
Son, YES!
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
Bread Crumbs
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