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Big Account... Warning! Graphic Violence!
Killer steps up to the window
He's waited long enough
The doors have all been locked
And now he can get tough
He waited while the girls
All talked about boy-friends
And now his patience has
Come right to the end
The other's wouldn't help
The girl on drive-up duty
The manager was kissing ass
Trying to get some booty
Killer's seen enough
Now he's really pissed
He bends Mike into a pretzel
Now his own ass he can kiss
The girls are all screaming now
'Cept that hard-core chick
He staples blondie's lips to nose
And gives her chin a lick
The vault is standing open
He herds them all inside
Hard-core chick he leaves out
The rest are going to ride
The ones that have open mouths
He stuffs 'em full of bills
Mike, he whimpers on a bed of loot
Cash won't cure HIS ills
The blood is running all on the floor
As 'hard-core chick' yells give 'em more
A pretty hand with pink, pink nails
Slammed in a drawer, amid the wails
Now it's time to count the fingers
Put them in the counting machine
Blood squirts out of the wringers
Ohhh...listen to her scream
There's a client, one who wouldn't go
Hiding behind the ornate vase
Killer spots him, don't you know
Used a paper-weight to smash his face
The last one is just scared right to death
She can't even scream no more
Breaks the bones in that lovely breast
As he slams the big vault door
He motions now to Hard-core
Come and let me out
She does so quite reluctantly
He kisses off her pout
As he walks away
She hears him mutter low
"Thanks for the excersise" my dear
But now, I really have to go
Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Bloody hell, u go Killer
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
The guest...
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hey
Darby Cain
16 years 8 months ago
classic geezer
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Gee
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
I....
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Our Pleasure...
hardcorechick28
16 years 8 months ago
I am....