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Sep 23, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Well Being

When the body betrays...
and illness compels
all that we wish
is once again to be well
Yet while we are strong
and the body complies
all that we wish
is  what each of us tries
to decifer
to determine
to project
to convey
But did you take time
to be grateful today?

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press

16 years 7 months ago

Corina

My girl I knew you would , bring it to the table. Why did you stop ? You should have let them have it . Please can I add to your poem. All in fun Ms Corina But did you take time to be grateful today? Grateful, One more time Sunshine put a smile on you face Grateful , One more time every breath you take Grateful, One time to laugh at your mistakes Gratefully your family wants all the time with you love can make OK Corina hit me back Press
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Lovely

What a beautiful write. You have a lovely heart. Well Done. Love Lyz.x
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Corina

I echo Lyz on this one its beautiful in thought and sentiment ... lovely lovely write glad I found it ... kind regards Jayne
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello

This is a wonderful write! And a message that I needed and can take to heart. Nice to meet you. Always, Cat