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where longing lives

Let me feel the poetry
of you upon me,
in the light and shaded movement of your skin,
as leaves dance before a storm
excited on their branches.

Let me hear the sound
when passion begins to win
and cresting waves break,
when depths are only places plummeted.

Chase me to your touch
so I may take these curves,
a hunter heading home
hungry from the hills
where longing lives.

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Country/Region: AUS

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Hi fellow Aussie

Enjoyed the write, I like the last stanza, quite beautiful in fact. Thank u for sharing. Love Lyz.
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Craig Norris

16 years 7 months ago

Hi Lyz

Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the visit and the comments, I've spent a little time down your way, love those beaches, the Merry weather. Cheers Craig.
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Craig

OK this ones fucking good one of my favourites from you ... absolutely beautiful in word and theme just awesome ... really loved this one ;) love and higgest bugs Jayne x x
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Craig Norris

16 years 7 months ago

Hey Jayne

you do have a way with words, thanks for your comments, it's great that you like this one, it's a bit of a quicky, I posted it without too much time and reading spent on it, but... it caught something of what I wanted to say, thanks again. cheers Craig.