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greeneyes
greeneyes
Sep 22, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

He watches Our Children


Moon shines bright in sky
Smiles down as our children sleep
protecting till dawn
— greeneyes, Sep 22, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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lyz

16 years 10 months ago

Hi

Love it.I believe this. Lyz X
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believe

16 years 10 months ago

I wrote kiddies stories

I wrote kiddies stories about a character I made up called Mr Moon, used to watch over the children and come down to help, So this is a part of what I called the enchanted side of the night, "got them to sleep" wonderful stuff love it LuvRay
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

ray

Well hello! you havent been around in a while! Wonderful to see you. Thank you so much for reading my poem. Greeneyes

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