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Leather and Lace: Sexually Explicit Lines

Winter's bitter night
Pressing against castle's stone walls
Icy wind seeping through the cracks
Chilling delicate skin

Slowly he edges toward her
Throwing shirt to floor
Her hungry eyes call to him
Asking him to take her once more

Through a blood stained smile
He ravishes her neck
Untieing each string
On her leather corset

Pushing against his body
Thrusting her hips against him
She unbuckles his belt, pants fall to the floor
With a wave of her magical hand
She locks the wooden door

Staring into each other's eyes
Flames dancing in the white
Hissing, clawing and tearing
He strips her to nothing
Milk white skin in the darkness

Throwing her against the wall
Lips caressing her breasts
Her hands slipping between his thighs
Blood dripping
Hearts pulsating
He slides between her weakend legs

Wrapping herself around him
Taking him all in
Softly she cries
As he wraps her in a lace curtain
Sweeping her off her feet

Over castle's ledge
Into the frigid night
He takes her with him
Never to be without the other again
Never was there such an unholy union
Living in perfect sin

— hardcorechick28, Sep 21, 2009

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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

Oh my dear!

I am a 65 year old woman, but not prim, a Trotskyite and rebel from way back. Oh I wish I had writen like this when I was your age! What might I be writing now? So scary, seductively scary, evil and beautiful. I only wish she had pushed him over the rampart alone, his perfect fuck, your glory. kind regards, Jean, meow, yip, purr, yowl and perfect body language of approval, contempt or demand
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you

So much!! i am taking a different more seductive approach with my poetry....throwing in the dark twist everyone is used to.....there will be more to come....its not over yet....
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Well done

So this means no sequel? Well done, enjoyed this very much, best I have read today. Lyz X.
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

there is more to come

Have no fear, DeMona and Deacon are here for the long haul. There will be more to come involving their relationship and sexcapades.....keep checking....
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Killer...

Wow! Great stuff. You have all us old farts panting and pawing right along with them. For a while I thought Killer was interested in wether she might have a sister he could meet. But turns out that he is too dispassionate, he just wants a lure, to intice his male victims. Does she like Chop Suey? He says he doesn't have much use for the left-overs and will be glad to send them over. LOL Maybe he will invite them over for dinner sometime soon. He likes company and they could all share a few good recipies. Nice work! ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

DeMona might....

be interested in Killer....obviously rough sex isnt an issue for her. Perhaps Killer should step into her dark world so they can get better acquainted!!!! I am glad you liked it..taking a more "dangerous", sexy approach to their relationship. There will be more to come. DeMona and Deacon are my characters, my creation. There is all manner of possibilities for the two of them. If passion is what everyone wants, there is plenty more where that came from....talk to ya soon...
KINGZOMBIE

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 8 months ago

gothic erotic

Its great,love the darkside,I just read your new one it's how I found this. It's kinda what I try to do but your much better.
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you very much

for your kind words. You will get better as you go on. It took me a while and I am still finding my voice. Keep plugging and you will do just fine.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

=0

I loved the rhyme scheme, it rolls right off the tongue. A very exciting write, and peek into the lives (deaths) of Deacon and his darling unholy mate. and to think I almost missed this one! Always, Cat
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hardcorechick28

16 years 7 months ago

glad u didnt

miss this one....i am just getting around to checking back on older poems to see if they attracted any more attention...i have alot of ideas and have created a new muse to go along with DeMona, to compliment her so to speak. Glad you enjoyed.