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how poems are born (this one's for you Theodore)

on the day God recognized Herself
She started writing Poetry again,
(and so Poetry is reborn in the
Presence of the present)
Her astonishment rises with the sun
and sets on no-one

but you see,
Theodore, my Beloved Sufi,
life is a Poem
and that falling leaf is shrine
about to break our hearts

shattered, shattering
into what can never
be written down, no matter
how many poems I write
no matter how many lives I live

the edge of reality meets in the
humble words of every Poem
as it moves your eyes across
the universe
from I to Thou.

strangers no more
adrift in our Aloneness
on the lifeboat called Poetry.














— Kailashana, Sep 21, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Anna

Big smile havent seen the blog but I love the reply lol this is fucking awesome ...*smiling bigger* hes going to love this ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Kailashana

HERE, HERE!!!!!, Bloody brilliant reply, and even God HERSELF would be proud of this. Well Done. Love Lyz. XX
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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

I am an atheist,

but if there was a god she would be just like you write. kind regards, Jean, meow, yip, purr, yowl and perfect body language of approval, contempt or demand
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 8 months ago

This is a very beautiful

This is a very beautiful poem, deep, meaninful and a touch of humour. My favourite lines are the edge of reality meets in the humble words of every Poem as it moves your eyes across the universe Cyber tendrils of thought being shared world wide inspiring the heart and soul. Well done