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The best of the old world

 The best of the old world

 

 

Summer-night silence.

The earth waits-

and I.

The thunder stuns,

splits the darkness.

Lightning-sudden illumination.

Brighter,

more neon than day.

The dry grass, white-lighted,

does not burn.

Nor I.

Yet we of the earth

tremble.

 

The sky breaks open

then the downpour

Gift of heaven for this scorched land.

Our faces, our mouths, our skin 

drink in the rain.

 

Another flash.

One glance enough.

Indra, the best of the old-world gods

rides resplendent

among the darkened clouds.

 

Beautiful and dangerous.



— Celadon, Sep 21, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

This poem is so picturesque, and you have worded it beautifully.It makes you feel and you have painted a picture for me. Your last write was quite good as well. Thank you. Indra sounds like a poem in himself. I Have not heard of him. The rains sound so soothing. well written. Love Lyz.xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

This is one of your best

This is one of your best that I have read in my opinion its wonderful ... you painted a beautiful picture in words ... Love Jayne x x