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Sep 21, 2009
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The best of the old world
The best of the old world
Summer-night silence.
The earth waits-
and I.
The thunder stuns,
splits the darkness.
Lightning-sudden illumination.
Brighter,
more neon than day.
The dry grass, white-lighted,
does not burn.
Nor I.
Yet we of the earth
tremble.
The sky breaks open
then the downpour
Gift of heaven for this scorched land.
Our faces, our mouths, our skin
drink in the rain.
Another flash.
One glance enough.
Indra, the best of the old-world gods
rides resplendent
among the darkened clouds.
Beautiful and dangerous.
— Celadon, Sep 21, 2009
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16 years 8 months ago
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