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Sep 20, 2009
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Bundle of joy
Doesn’t he look like his mother
And the nose, it’s his fathers you know
Look at his grin and the shape of his chin
He’s the image of your brother Joe
The hair, there’s a lot, it’s amazing
It’s like granddads before it fell out
His lungs are so strong, well it won’t be too long
He’ll be screaming and running about
Oh bless him he’s smiling, he’s lovely
He’s so cute you could eat him for tea
His eyes, well, they’re certainly grandma’s
Pick him up, pass him over to me
He must be an absolute treasure
New babies can bring so much joy
So what are you going to call him,
Oh dear, so, she isn’t a boy
And the nose, it’s his fathers you know
Look at his grin and the shape of his chin
He’s the image of your brother Joe
The hair, there’s a lot, it’s amazing
It’s like granddads before it fell out
His lungs are so strong, well it won’t be too long
He’ll be screaming and running about
Oh bless him he’s smiling, he’s lovely
He’s so cute you could eat him for tea
His eyes, well, they’re certainly grandma’s
Pick him up, pass him over to me
He must be an absolute treasure
New babies can bring so much joy
So what are you going to call him,
Oh dear, so, she isn’t a boy
— shazbat, Sep 20, 2009
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Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hi
shazbat
16 years 8 months ago
And all this was based on
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 8 months ago
Your a funny bloke
shazbat
16 years 8 months ago
Don’t some of the old
believe
16 years 8 months ago
great little new bundle of joy
shazbat
16 years 8 months ago
sorry this is a bit late ive
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
I can picture the scene,