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Sep 20, 2009
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ME AND ROCKY THE SQUIRREL
ME AND ROCKY THE SQUIRREL
The youth
Never will define
What a friend is
Within the youthfulness
Of a open mind
We all have moved
Time to time, to a bigger house
A pear tree to climb
And a backyard
But the night before , dad got a better job
Windows , without bars
Magically, gave view
To Rocky the squirrel
A friend I once knew
Rocky was young
And so was I
Our friendship conceived
At the blink of a eye
I always would say
Look at that crazy squirrel
I guess Rocky replied
You have to be crazy to live as a squirrel
I’ve never seen ,you climb a tree
Looking for pine cones , nuts or a pear to eat
Rocky was a smart ass , opinionated indeed
Rocky , that crazy squirrel
His friendship was free
Summers , winters
Came and gone
Me and rocky built a languish
Of our own
Ok to the readers , this poem is true . I have a pear tree in my backyard.
And there is a crazy squirrel named Rocky. I must say this poem started out hard for me
Because of the rhyming with the word squirrel . But it started to flow, and I have so much more to write
And it was fun. So question ? [part 2 or not guys]
The youth
Never will define
What a friend is
Within the youthfulness
Of a open mind
We all have moved
Time to time, to a bigger house
A pear tree to climb
And a backyard
But the night before , dad got a better job
Windows , without bars
Magically, gave view
To Rocky the squirrel
A friend I once knew
Rocky was young
And so was I
Our friendship conceived
At the blink of a eye
I always would say
Look at that crazy squirrel
I guess Rocky replied
You have to be crazy to live as a squirrel
I’ve never seen ,you climb a tree
Looking for pine cones , nuts or a pear to eat
Rocky was a smart ass , opinionated indeed
Rocky , that crazy squirrel
His friendship was free
Summers , winters
Came and gone
Me and rocky built a languish
Of our own
Ok to the readers , this poem is true . I have a pear tree in my backyard.
And there is a crazy squirrel named Rocky. I must say this poem started out hard for me
Because of the rhyming with the word squirrel . But it started to flow, and I have so much more to write
And it was fun. So question ? [part 2 or not guys]
— press, Sep 20, 2009
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lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Press
press
16 years 10 months ago
OK lyz
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Dear press
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