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John and Salome

John and Salome The dancer bends each moment to her body, She splints each rigid second with her sway. She is present, She makes time's heart skip one, two beats, She asks for the head of prophet after prophet And recieves them. The future is not wanted here. The past crushes like grapes beneath her feet. The prophet wanders in the desert Where it is always high noon, And still, He sees his shadow looming towards the appointed hour. When it arrives, The hands will stop, His tongue will make a bell of his skull. They are long gone. His last meal is amber and insect in his stomach, And she feeds her atoms to children one by one. And the prophecy reaches me now, Two thousand years too late, Two thousand years too soon: A man will lie down in the middle of time, A man will cross-section the hours. The days , the years, pin down his hands, Pin down his feet.
— Diatom Shells, Sep 19, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Diatom Shells

Yes, finally you have written something I know about and by the way it is written to perfection. Loved it all but the last stanza is a gem. Loved this greatly. Always emotionally, beautifully written with feelings, are ur poems. Love Lyz XX
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Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

lyz,

I am glad that you know of this or these people and I can write to perfection such a sensitive story. loves -shells
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Orphani

16 years 8 months ago

skillfully executed. Presise

skillfully executed. Presise in its dissection of futility from hope.The final question is this: eternaly pinned to the cross ,or assended in glory and seated at the right hand of God.Depends on your point of view.alive or dead?and if ones point of view is death.how far does that death reach?To me content always superseeds form.
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

o!

well in my book he will always be alive he just participated in death to rid us of the illusion of time I personally think I am immortal because I will not truly die when I die I will live. thanks hun for your words! -di-atoms one by one
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

heloo k

I appreciate your honesty here but I cannot dissect a thing which is alive you know you can only perform a dissection when a thing is dead! but if you look up john and salome in with a search engine I believe you may understand this poem better I speak of both salomes here the dancer and the disciple. thanks you -shells
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Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

too much honey k

I think you may be over analyzing this a bit too much hunny k. poems aren't always supposed to make sense to the mind but felt in the heart then translated through the veins into blue and red ink, and that is what this is for me. I feel a poem is not owned by the author how can we have ownership rights to things that are eternal, words never die and poems to me belong also to a certain people. some can take from a write what they will and others receive nothing and go on about their day as if they haven't read anything that day. I believe that is what is beautiful about this talent of ours an interconnected or cross section of emotion an ouroboros of sorts. eternal relation. I hope I didn't talk your ear off your skull. I think if you will it to be 'hands of time', so be it! thank you love me always -shells
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Diatom Shells

16 years 8 months ago

absolutely not!

I respect your words and criticisms and they are always welcome with me. I think your beliefs are true in references to languages completely. but the words don't with me is all im saying. I like to believe we are all made up of ancient words we were soken into existance therefore words are enternal. lol well any way blessings and peace to you. -shells